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Friday, November 23, 2012

My Profile -Astrith P.

MY PROFILE


My name is Astrith.I'm 12 years old.My birthday is September 28. I live in Spain (pina de Ebro). My favorite sport is basketball. I don't like football.I love the music and the animals.I ike animals and dance.

4 comments:

IKER L. said...

This is incorrect ("pina de Ebro"). The correct is (Pina de Ebro).

IKER L. said...

This is incorret "I don't like football.I love the music" the correct is "I don't like football. I love the music"

IKER L. said...

This is incorrect "My name is Astrith.I'm 12 years old.My birthday" the correct is "My name is Astrith. I'm 12 years old. My birthday"

DAVID.A said...

this is incorrect "My birthday is September 28" the correct is "My birthday is on 28th September"